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Sunday, November 22, 2015

I'll Be the Judge of that: The Power of the Gavel - Info for Writers with Judge Hopkins

ThrillWriting welcomes Judge Bill Hopkins.
To read another interview with Bill go to: "Judgemental"




Fiona -
Judge, thank you for coming by and helping us writers write it right. I hoped to talk to you today about POWER! That gavel is formidable.

Today, let's on work on writing a courtroom scene right. 

What's your first bit of advice for writers?

Bill - 
If you want a courtroom scene to read right, go visit your local courthouse and sit in on trials or docket calls or whatever they have going. Most judges (I hope) would be happy to explain the difference between a civil and a criminal case. Most civil and all criminal cases (except juvenile) are open to the public.

Fiona - 
The reality of going to sit in on a case is not what you see on TV. What are your pet peeves about TV courtroom depiction?


Bill - 
My pet peeve is how exciting court is depicted on television. One time a guy came in my office with a holstered weapon and another time a woman ran out of court and a deputy latched onto her and dragged her back. That's about it for my exciting times. Most court (even criminal stuff) is tedious.

Obviously, the people involved are very much concerned about how the court session turns out. I always kept that in mind. These people may be here for the first and only time in the court system. I had to get it right.

Fiona - 
When I'm up at the courts, I'm always surprised by how casually people dress. On TV everyone looks extremely conservative and I've never seen anyone show up in rabbit-patterned fleece pajamas. But in real life, I have, indeed. 

What did people usually wear in your courtroom (outside of the lawyers) And tell truth, were you wear in your rabbit fleece pjs under your robe?

Bill - 
I started in 1975. People would rarely come to court dressed as casually as they do now, although it did happen. Once I had a young woman come in who was just barely modest. I asked her lawyer where his client lived. Not too far away, he said. I said, "You send her home to put clothes on, and I'll be waiting for her here." Her lawyer said, "I'm sorry, Your Honor. I didn't know that was a rule." I said, "That's not a rule. That's common sense." He still despises me.

And, yes, I have now seen people (usually young women) come to court dressed in pajamas. I wouldn't go to a moonshine still in pajamas, much less a courtroom. This action literally astounds me when I see it.

Fiona - 
Being a judge, is it like actually having a super-power?

Bill - 
Maybe. But it's one that must be used rarely. 

The power a judge has can be awesome (using the correct definition of the word). It's something that judges should use carefully. I will use myself for an example. Once, a person called to jury duty failed to show up. I issued an order, compelling her to appear and show cause why I shouldn't throw her in jail. She showed up and had no excuse for not showing up. I said, "I can either throw you in jail overnight or fine you $50." She said she'd take the overnight jail stay.



            Woman argues with judge and ends up with 300 days in jail


The bad judges don't last long. At least that's been my experience by watching a bunch of judges fall from grace since the time I started practicing law in the 1970s. There are lots of temptations and I had my share. But I always found that no temptation was worth my job and reputation.

Fiona -
What confines a judge when making decisions about sentencing. I've heard of some pretty out-of-the-box ways that judges have meted out punishments. When do you have flexibility to be creative and when is there a mandate and you have very little choice?



Jail or Pepper Spray!

Bill -
In most state courts (but not in federal courts) a judge usually has a minimum and a maximum in sentencing. If it's a felony, the judge will usually get a pre-sentence investigation report before the actual sentencing. The person making the report will recommend what sentence the judge should mete out. Judges, in my experience, usually follow that recommendation.

In the state courts, there is also a review available to people who have plead guilty to a felony. For example, in Missouri it's called a post conviction review. Another trial court judge will look at the sentence and say yes, it was fair (about 99%) or no, it wasn't.

In federal court, according to what I've heard, the sentence is mandated. The judge has very little discretion. This has caused a lot of injustices with people being given harsh sentences for minor crimes. I knew this wouldn't work when it was passed in the 1980s, and I was right.

Fiona -
I have never before heard of a pre-sentence investigation report Can you tell me who compiles the report and what kind sort things are taken in to consideration? Also, do both lawyers get a copy? Or is that for the judge's eyes only?

Bill -
The probation and/or parole officers usually compile these reports. The person's record, co-operation with this arrest, home situation, drug (alcohol, pot, etc.) use, and all other good and bad points for the defendant are considered. Prosecution and defense both get copies. It's a public document. In fact, most everything is public in criminal cases. We don't have star chamber proceedings as they did in England before the Revolution. We do have secret FISA courts, which are federal courts which decide on security issues and which I think are grossly unconstitutional.

Fiona - 
I often see on the news that the victims have an opportunity to address the courts. To say how the criminal actions have impacted them and their families. Is there room to take this information into the decision making about sentencing or are you following that pre-sentence investigation report?

Bill - 
Yes, that's a victim impact statement. I think it's great that courts are taking a victim's perspective into account. However, you must remember that some victims are not exactly angels.

Fiona -
What's the most unorthodox punishment you handed down and why did you do it?

Bill - 
I had offenders who had littered clean up the main street of our little town, which meant that all their friends would drive up and down and honk and refer to them by rude names. It was quite effective.

Fiona - 
What "seals the deal" when you're making up your mind about the offenders culpability?

Bill - 
If you're talking about a non-jury trial, I'd say that most defendants want to testify. Their lawyers hate that. But if they do testify, defendants almost always start running off at the mouth and blab some incriminating evidence. Thus, I'd encourage the defendants to talk. In a non-jury trial, the judge can get away with asking lots of questions that he couldn't and shouldn't ask in front of a jury.

Fiona - 
That's interesting. Did you prefer jury-ed or non-jury-ed trials. And in a jury trial - did you ever just really disagree with their decision?

Bill - 
I liked both kinds of trials. What was interesting in a jury trial is that after the verdict is rendered and the judge dismisses the jury, anyone can talk to them and ask them why they decided the way they did. That was always interesting. I never disagreed with a jury that I remember. I was the neutral in the situation and just watched things unfold.

Fiona - 
You must have heard some difficult things over the years. What coping mechanisms did you put in place. Also, did everyone want to be your friend? You know...just in case.

Bill -
The most disturbing case I heard was a young man who pledged a fraternity was literally beaten to death by the active members in an alleged initiation rite. I had to watch the young man's momma look at pictures of her dead child and identify them. Not good.

People I knew who were or thought they were my good friends always got another judge, not me. I made sure of that.

When you're in the public eye, someone is always out to get you. I always understood that from the very beginning of my career.

Fiona - 
What did you do/could you do to protect yourself and your family (I mean ex-cons, sometimes feel a little upset.)

Bill - 
I have always been well-armed.

Fiona - 

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1 comment:

  1. I've been reading legal thrillers for 20+ years. I've always said you could tell who was actually a lawyer and who wasn't by the way they wrote the scenes. Spending a couple of weeks on jury duty and sitting for a criminal proceeding and a few civil ones cemented that for me. The experience was an invaluable look at how it all really works.

    Great article and great interview! Thanks!

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