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Sunday, August 16, 2015

What's in Your Wallet? Every Day Carry for Your Character: Info for Writers

Do you remember watching that old game show "Let's Make a Deal"? Monty Hall would ask women to reach into their purses and pull out absurd things, pieces of cheese and such. As a kid, I wondered what thought process the women would go through when making their choices of what to bring to the show -- just in case it got them an opportunity to play the game.

I thought about this again when I was reading Janet Evanovich's By the Numbers series. Stephanie Plumb had a gun and maybe some bullets in her purse. . .somewhere. . . 

What your character carries with them is a big insight into the character's thought process, background, and lifestyle. As an example, I'm going to show you the inside of my purse so you can see what I mean.


Ta dah! This is my purse with the insides pulled out. 

It weighs a TON!


In the center of the black organizer is this toiletry bag

Which looks like this when opened.

By now you might be thinking, wow this chick is VERY organized. 

When it comes to my purse, I am. 

Just like a bag carried by a military person or an EMT, my bag is there for convenience and to save lives. It has saved lives many times. So I am very careful with how things are packed into my bag.



This is what's inside that toiletry bag:


On the right of the bag are the everyday niceties: 

  • chapstick - outdoors a lot
  • deodorant - two teens
  • lotion

On the left tools/safety


  • paracord (blog article)
  • swiss army type knife
  • small leatherman
  • Glucose tabs (to counter low blood sugar)

In the center go six specialized mini-kits:


Kit #1 (MOST important)

  • diabetic meter
  • test strips and fresh needles
  • alcohol wipe
  • lancet
  • fast acting glucose (read about using that in this scene of MISSING LYNX)
  • And a hair tie - because if you're using the glucose gel on someone, you'll have it in your hair.

Kit #2

  • shampoo taken from hotel stay because it works like soap.
  • lighter/cotton balls for fire starting
  • 2 glow sticks
  • tweezers (can use lighter to disinfect)
  • 2 different colors of duct tape - the bright pink is good for marking trails if you are lost. Also great for writing information for the EMT prior to their arrival when assessing and triaging folks. Just stick it on their arm at the wrist.
  • And grey is an all purpose helper. (They are each wrapped around used gift cards.)










Kit #3
Mini first aid 
  • honey works great for a bunch of issues from low glucose to wound care
  • benadryl in instant melt form can save someone having an allergic reaction




Kit #4 
Hair and Clothes






Kit #5
Meds - the basics 
  • Advil
  • Allergy
  • Pamperin (great for migraines)
  • Imodium


Kit #6 
Other first aid - (products for alternative use)





Now all of that goes into an outer carry case with pockets that contains:
  • umbrella with pen light
  • water
  • wand flashlight
  • pens
  • CPR kit with gloves and respiration mask
  • 6 meal replacement bars
  • red lipstick 

My keys:  
  • flashlight
  • multitool
  • whistle



Did you note how many forms of light I have?
1 high lumen hand held light wand
1 high lumen tactical flashlight
2 glow sticks
1 hand crank flashlight
1 mini pen light
(and if push came to shove) a lighter
____________
8 forms of lighting. 

WHY??? you may ask. I have been involved in many a crisis, and it seems the one recurrent theme is it's pitch black. Emergencies in the dark are darned dangerous.

Did you notice the forms of food/glucose?
6  meal replacement bars
2 honey
1 tube glucose tablets
1 tube fast acting glucose
$ for emergency food
_____________
11 forms of possible sugar/food. 

WHY??? (I know the diabetes meter was a give away.) My kid #4 is a T-1 diabetic. BUT 1/3 of America has some form of diabetes. All of the emergency diabetic stuff I carry, in the ten years I have carried it, has only been used to save strangers' lives.

If I had lead a life different from the one I have, I would obviously carry different products in a different way. 

Things not on my priority list include brushes and makeup except for my energy boosting red lipstick which BTW is excellent for writing tourniqueted-limb times on foreheads etc. Ah, now would your character have had that thought when she put her lipstick in her bag?

What's in your character's wallet or purse? 
  • Will it help? 
  • Will it thwart? 
  • Will it give insight? 
  • Will it be a conversation starter?
  • MAYBE it will twist your plotline.



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Sunday, December 14, 2014

Can Your Character Survive Multiple Attackers? Info for Writers w/ Terror Expert Rock Higgins

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Hello Fellow Writers,
Today, my friend Rock Higgins is here to help me with a scene where multiple attackers gang up on my heroine.

Many of you have probably read some of my other interviews with Rock; but if not, let me tell you why he's my go-to guy for all scenes that save my girl.  Rock is an Executive Protection Officer. He is a Certified Anti-Terrorism Specialist who trains businesses in anti-terrorism procedures. He also teaches civilians, law enforcement, military, and bodyguards in close quarter combat.

To work through this plotting issue, we are using this tape of an actual attack.





Fiona - 
Okay Rock, can you walk me through this? What were the options? Mistakes? Did the victim do anything right?

Rock - 
Ok at 17 seconds he is surrounded by 5 guys to the front and left and right but no one to the rear, his escape route.

The next act is typical, no cognitive thought of escape and tunnel vision sets in. (to read about tunnel vision go HERE) He argues with the short guy to his right, exposing his back to the fat guy on his left. He had to expose his back to someone, and the fat guy was the best option as he was not going to run too far or too fast. This on the victim's part though was not a planned move.

What he did:
He pushes the short guy but closes with him at the same time so they are holding each other's arms so he cannot get free, at 23 seconds the rest are on him because he did not create space.

What he should have done:
Violent push on the short guy to; if not send him sprawling then to create space and then run full speed to his right, his rear previously. No pre-emptive strike in this case, if it didn't work there would be no space created and no time to correct the decision and run.

He breaks away at 30 seconds. He is either not a very fast runner or more likely he is dazed from the previous blows.

At 37 seconds they have him again up against the wall. He is standing square onto them trying to cover up, head down arms over his head. Here he cannot see where his attackers are, where the blows are coming from and cannot mount an attack from this position.

I have been in a similar position before, more attackers, and I was not alone.

I ended up with my back against the wall next to a friend with around 7-8 guys around us. Both in combat stances and fighting back anyone who ventured in. Effectively fighting back puts doubt into those attacking you, by effective I mean you seriously hurt one of them. They are then unsure whose turn it is to attack next.

To get to this stage you have to weather the initial attack by fighting and making space so that from everyone attacking at once it slows down to limited sporadic singular attacks.

All the while you are looking to escape. We escaped by both going on the offensive against one person, creating space and running as fast as we could.

Fiona - 
I was wondering about getting her back to the wall so at least she could see her attackers. What do you think about her getting in a doorway? Is this a trap or does it protect her on three sides?

Rock - 
I would not choose the doorway option as you are hemmed in and there is still going to be at least two attacking, more if the doorway is larger and the only escape is through the attackers. But if you are protecting someone, your spouse for example then a doorway would be a better option as you need to be in front of them to defend them anyway. But these are best or worst case scenarios, depends on how you look at it.

You could argue that the wall will protect your back, it does but again you have to work at your escape route.

With gang and multiple attackers you will more than likely not have the choice of where to stand your ground. Running at the earliest option is the best plan.

You can see from this and other clips how fast it all happens and how much ground the fight can cover in a short space of time. Each move and stop will bring different escape options.


Fiona - 
I was taught to turn a block into a shove aiming at shoving one bad guy into another if possible and the number one move was flee - but I was thinking also, of protecting a child or someone who could not flee.


Rock - 
Yes if your attackers are standing in such a fashion that you can use one as a shield or push them into each other then great. But here we have to remember that if we can grab them then they can grab us.

If your character is protecting someone, it is going to be a big problem. They're just going to have to run the gauntlet, sorry more like walk the gauntlet. It's going to be a fighting retreat. Your character and who your character is looking after are going to get hurt maybe more than normal because you cannot escape as fast when on your own. They're going to be in the contact area a lot longer.

Fiona - 
At the dojang, we drill with the kids in the hopes that if push did come to shove, their bodies would know what to do even if their brains turn off. We make it a game. In real life, out of the blue, adults should expect the kids to do the wrong thing - Freeze in place. Try to protect their parent. Not hear or follow directions. 

Rock tell me, what if a character knows her family is a target, can you go through some training scenarios that that family might engage in with their kids without terrifying them?

Rock - 
We do a drill for guys looking after young kids who are too old to be carried because of size. 

Because of the sensitive nature of this drill, the violence, it's not something that you can easily train for with the child. There has to be a lot of talking with the child first for them to understand what is happening, why it is happening and how they can help.

We have one person playing the child, one acting as the BG (bodyguard)/ parent and one acting as attacker. One variation is where the attacker has to get to the child but not attack the BG the BG can only push the attacker away. The BG also has to give orders to the child.

Another is where the attacker can attack the BG to get to the child, much harder. Then we put in multiple attackers, weapons and different locations, open spaces, getting in and out of vehicles, corridors, lifts, in fact most locations.

At all times you have to be in touching distance of the child so you can feel where they are. Difficult part for parents and child is telling their child to run when it is safe to do so while they cover their escape.

Most instruction only covers the physical aspect but if the child is (and will be) traumatised, frozen in place, then the training is useless.

A good game for the kids is to play this with both parents with no mention of what the game means. One tries to catch the child and the other defends. You could encompass trying to take the rag from the child's back pocket for instance.

Training can be done both armed and unarmed, single BG /parent, single/multiple kids lots of combinations.

Fiona - 
Fighting takes fitness.

Rock -
It's not pretty, and it's very tiring. Most people do not realise the amount of fitness you need for a situation like this. 


Fiona - 
Thank you, Rock for your help writing my scene.

You can catch up with Rock at:
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